If you take a look at some of the previous applications that says (accepted) on them, you will see a small roleplay story that has been added.
As nice as it was to read about your Tibian history, a roleplay story looks like the one true thing missing from your application
Look forward to reading it!
Leader of the Red Rose Legatus
"There are things in the universe that are simply and purely evil. A warrior does not seek to understand them, or to compromise with them. He seeks only to obliterate them."
In response to Rye Ane's request, I tell you, in brief words, the story of Cappelletti Al Ragu.
With the dream of exploring the world and cooking cappelletti's, Mr. Cappelletti (or Mr. Ragù) is a solitary knight, who has always lived surrounded by violence.
Throughout his life, he had to deviate from his dreams and dedicate himself to the arts of weapons with the aim of improving his skills, strength, and defending himself, which he could never do in the beginning.
Wounded countless times, his few friends were killed in battle throughout his life, and Cappelletti became an elite knight who always sought a less tortuous path. Amidst the storms, he never lost his kindness, hope, and altruism.
Dedicating himself to maces since his first contact with a mace in RookGaard, he participated in countless wars in the interests of others.
Desperate for direction, wounded and disheartened, he encountered the spirit of light during a night on the beach.
Since then, an inexplicable understanding and feeling took possession of Cappelletti, when he swore never again to raise his sword against the helpless or tolerate the abuse of power by anyone.
However, due to loyalty to his oath, Cappelletti lives a dilemma: to be the sword of justice or to find true love? They seem contradictory and irreconcilable paths, and meanwhile, Cappelletti dedicates himself to training and helping those in need.