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The Sun Was High And So Was I

Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 11:17 am
by Vuzufune
With the fallen leaves in the sky coming down, I could smell the harvest and the death in the air. Nobody remembers these things when they were a kid but they fueled our everlasting long summers at campfires and the smell of night dew with the firefly's. What a small vast place we all live in. Ever changing and vast.

Sinned again to the pastor's friend and God was half in existence. I had no idea all things were one then. You just do because you're excited to be a new being in this place.

Have you ever cried? Well so have I...

Re: The Sun Was High And So Was I

Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:06 pm
by Meriado
An interesting read, Vuzufune!

I read it several times, but could not exactly put my finger on what it's about.

"Mysterious" texts can be very entertaining sometimes though! A great read!

Are these your old work are have you been inspired lately? :)

Re: The Sun Was High And So Was I

Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 11:46 pm
by Vuzufune
Inspiration, my personal writings you would never be able to understand >.<

And I was inspired to write this from a childhood experience where I harmed an animal, it still haunts me.

Re: The Sun Was High And So Was I

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 2:07 am
by Avenlia Silvershade
This was really great!

Summoned a really mysterious, sincere and dark mood, which I loved.

Last sentence nailed it, if you ever read this Vuzu, good job!

Re: The Sun Was High And So Was I

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:00 am
by Cinny
I love the title so much